Michael Anthony
Michael Anthony
Mar 20, 2024
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Fairytale Waltz

"Can we dance on the moon?", she asks.

"We might even be graceful there, low gravity and all,
but the scientists don't recommend it", I reply."

"Well, if we hold on to each other at least
we'll be together if we jump too high
and float away.", her playful remark.

"Well, scientists be damned! I can't think of anyone else
I'd like to be with out there among the stars.", I assure her.

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Region, Country: San Francisco Bay Area - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Bukowski

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M

Hi Michael Anthony!
What a beautiful poem! The dialogue is so incredibly sweet and endearing. I love love love this poem, thank you for sharing!
Best,
MM