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Jan 06, 2013

fairy snowy love

you are so wonderful
the icy flakes must slap
as warmth through your lips
you exchange
through mittens
I guess
though it rained
and
may have snowed....

your words are outstanding
and befitting too
how I wish I could compose
as lovely poetry as you do.

perhaps this is my maiden attempt
as I traverse across
the snow clad street
side by side
yes of course incognito
tis true....

they say read Keats
Shelly and who else
but I see the flicker of a poet
in each one of us,
including me,yes I do
hope fully you would too

each poem read must inspire warmth
love and affection,
as my fairyish poet
you now do
of course I wish well
to both of you ...

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 3 months ago

This reminded me of Gollum in the Hobbit talking to his other self, but it had a likeable theme and feelings running through and I enjoyed the read, Yours Ian.T

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