The night sky
draws ink from clouds
drifting through
faded light
I am blown away
by empty spaces
falling leaves
and messengers
dressed like angels
with moonlight halos.
Oct 02, 2011
faded light
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Insightful
Just love it. Thats all I can say.
Mona
xox
Anna ...
abstract, but I love it! Only one suggestion I'd
make, "moonlit", just an idea.
Dear Anna,
A pensive mood... I like the imagery!
always, Cat
Full of wonder
Love Ann.