lovedly
lovedly
Aug 26, 2021

Exotic Nights

All nights want to be
ecstatic and exotic

we must undress silence
kindly enjoy this only life

let night be musically
vibrational

we are or we were born
out of the silence of night ~~~
but still laughing
shrieking
till angels fall from heaven
seeking us

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

More from this author

Comments

Geezer

the dawn a' coming,
it's coming 'round the bend
We're stuck here on the Earth
but good times are here again

Music from the angels
keeps on us on our toes
Dancing to the beat
to a tune that we all know

Sorry, just couldn't resist!
I like your poem, it gives the sense that everything isn't as bad as it might be.
~ Geez.
.

lovedly

What comes from the inner core
depth of the heart
from whose heart other than Gee's
can it ever be an integral part

Thanks Gee after Sparrow
I love thee
May be friends as you always say
last birth we must have been
in he wilderness
where deserts must have been serene
must be rainier pastures

to have a good friend like you
one needs genes of diamonds
you know GEE
thanks to thee

Jackweb

All nights want to be
ecstatic and exotic

we must undress silence
kindly enjoy this only life

let night be musically
vibrational
first, you're a poet indeed. i love the construction of the verse. Very apt! these lines above clothes the body of the poem with energy and truly they are well chosen. Its just a sweet verse in my eyes. Good write up Lovedly