Emotions In Colors

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Emotions In Colors

Color Me:
relaxed is blue
dark blue is peaceful
jittery is light green
dark green has me feeling mean
yellow is hostile, on edge,
someone could be pushed from the ledge.
purple is passion,
which possesses.
energy and resolve
found in shades of red,
it always clears my head.
within shades of grey
walking the razor's edge.
black is my home, and protector
it's all can be said,
except it's great melded with red.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

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Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Northwestern Wisconsin USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe

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Comments

I like how...

You have made the colors your own. I am sure that many people don't see all colors the way that everyone else does.
Your images are of a distinct personality, one that chooses to discern them on how they make you feel. The flow is good, and I don't really see any way that I could improve it. ~ Geez.
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