What an orgasmic feeling
The culmination of the
Ultimate awaited eruption
Anointment
In the soft sweet milk divine
A final sealing of human ecstasy
Soaring,
As it collapses
Two souls bound as one
Poem inspired by raj the poet
Nov 13, 2011
Ecstasy
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Loved..
you have captured the moment very nicely..
Thanks
I can see experience
Does speak
You lead the road
For this one
And
So you get the credit for it...
Let there be more occasions
For rainbows to light your path,
And as the moment arrives
And
You reach the destination,
Let that moment be caught,
In an expanse of momentary time,
But it ought to be
As much as your name is
Superbly raj_sublime
I always remember
that you only like my compositions
when these are abstract
and then only they your eyes attract
so this has achieved its aim
so be it thanks rosi happy recalling those who laps -ed