lovedly
lovedly
Sep 10, 2020

DUDE NOW I'm Seventeen

I think
love only flows
through one's eyes
when one is a day short of seventeen

but shy
then hopes beyond the skies lie

as in dreams above to heavens fly
then in hopes we lie
at seventeen oh my

lordly of love come along

I am now off seventeen
so now I to you belong
oooooo do come along..

you may be no more
but a poet of love we all adore
in heaven now all the more

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Thanks for the Inspiration O ONCE LOVELY LOVE POET

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Geezer

the age of consent is seventeen in your country? ~ Geez.
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lovedly

I'm old enough to be your granpa
but I compose poetry still
in order to love of life instill
in everyone one who reads me
he or she

will U also kid
keep going you have a long way
I am on the edge of time
as time slips
I may also

then remember
poetry is imagery
just emotionary
we all come to go
we don't come
nor go
of our own
unless ah now you also know
lol
keep evolving poetry often is
like problems solving

so straighten your avatar
o youngly
poetess
all will you
Bless

Geezer

be fourteen as long as you can. Being a grown-up like lovedly, [going into his second-childhood at eighty], is not all it's cracked up to be. We do try to be child-like in some respects and have some fun though. Glad to see you can laugh. ~ Geez.
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lovedly

don't ask me
a desire to be youngly
@80
not beyond 16
help me
will ye
Glee
sorry an extra
L