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Feb 18, 2011

Deprivation

Deprivation

Deprivation
Is the sperm,
For poetic emotional creation,
Without which there can be
No procreation.

Two are needed,
One a sperm
Another
An ovum
And
In creativity your are
The natural sperm
And
Mind, is your ovum

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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14 years 2 months ago

In reply to by yenti

This poem was my comment
On someone’s poem
On another site
And I don't read weird what...not
And others who don’t read me
Ur the best friend
I have and Shirley
Poetry is our forte
Combinedly
Hopefully

loved

loved

14 years 2 months ago

This poem was my comment
On someone’s poem
On another site
And I don't read weird what...not
And others who don’t read me
Ur the best friend
I have and Shirley
Poetry is our forte
Combinedly
Hopefully

C

that my mind was "me" or the extension of my inmost being.
Your proposition has me rethinking that. :-))