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Oct 21, 2012

On departure of a friends spouse…

thanks all
it’s a sad day today
but all your appreciations
make way

and

sweet smiles I now
once again display

life's mission is so
that's all we know,
people come and people go

when who will come
we perhaps, may know
but who's to go
Heaven alone knows...

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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Comments

judyanne

at first read i felt it trite
but as i read it over i really got a strong emotion of total acceptance, and i liked it more and more

only one suggestion
'but who goes'
i would make
'but who's to go'

love judy
xxx