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About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: [This option has been removed]

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: by Dundee, Scotland, GBR

Favorite Poets: I try not to be influenced; I like the work of Chez Harvey and Lane A Smith

Comments

I hear you

I hear you, Ian, but my line-lengths etc are as deliberate as my words, for many reasons. If I allow readers to 'see' something in a state other than as I have conceived it I am party to dishonesty. I am not Esker. I do not write like Esker, nor should I try to. If I can't present my work as I wish to present it - indeed if I am simply not allowed to - then I am in the wrong place and should go where I am allowed to present it.

Marie

Marie,

i am sorry the current format doesn't allow you to present the poem how you want. I am keen to read your poem in your format, would you be kind enough to email me the poem...email address sent via PM.

kindest regards,