lovedly
lovedly
Dec 19, 2017

Death So True

When death becomes
the inevitable
full stop
who can erase
or add another stop
none never

So all oldies like you and I
think of the distance
between our last coma
and final full stop

You so boldly say
Dead
on behalf of poets of lure
who by now since 1976
must have gone away
for ever for sure
speak nothing else
but of death
yet unsure

Full stop.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Geezer

coma or comma? I didn't get the reference of 1976. Can you enlighten me?
~ Gee.
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Geezer

A long time ago, but I'm sure that there are some of the ole poets alive yet. They have just passed on to other realms. Feeling stagnant here myself. The revival hasn't happened. Too bad. ~ Gee.
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lovedly

there aren't many gems in the sea
till this site introduces
poem read by how many
like all sites do

stagnation is meant
for both me and you
I have been here for over a decade
still feeling cold

LIKE I am unbalanced
as a one legged

glad at least we converse with one another
Stan does only at times
he is MUCH too busy
into rhymes

NOW hope he sn't thinking of crimes
just coz it with his poetry rhymes