lovedly
lovedly
Aug 06, 2014

Dance for now

In the distance
of a dark lovely night...
we dance alone
in hope
someone will come through
the darker forest
from a horse alight
right
and pick me up
to take home
away from my home

till such a one arrives
I shall dance tonight
rain, hail or storm
dance will be the norm

come tonight
dance alright
along with me
yeah that's right

we will dance
vertically and horizontally
that's all up to me
not ye...

let me

dance for now !

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Rula

Rula

10 years 8 months ago

This is too gentle to end it up with that shout
Keep it as tender as your lone dance, will you? :)

R

raj

10 years 8 months ago

A nice one but I agree with Rula's comment...

Regards,

lovedly

the last caps were taken off
thanks for ur msg
another one i will post here softly one