Détente

Thunder before rain
A rainbow offers a truce
from the raging storm

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Fooling around with the Haiku form tonight.

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: San Francisco Bay Area - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Bukowski

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Comments

I think...

that you need something like [Nature's] to go with the Detente or Detente Au Natural? ~ Geez.
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Thanks Geez! I was stretching the definition of the word "Detente" here: "The easing of hostility or strained relations", so I thought it appropriate with the poem. Maybe it worked, or maybe not, LOL.

Best

Thumbs up...

Good job! ~ Geez.
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