loved
loved
Jan 15, 2011

Congratulate me for my Triplets

Some One Awaits

Some one awaits me
Far away in a land called destiny,
He loves me
Not my poetry
But hits a tick for each
He’s married,
A Gemini he,
I told him he’d fall for me.
He swore he won’t,
But yesterday he sent a note
Oh Love,
I miss thee.

None Lover Friend

No one can beat you
In love
And in your poetry,
Coz you love
Compose better
Even now than before
Sure your loved one
Made mistakes
Now comes to the fore,
Do love her as you once did
Ok very much more

In All Humility

Thank you all
Those who shower love
Upon my poems
Soft ones hence,
Softer still
Will touch your hearts
If you will
So continue to play
With my heart still

I love to touch your inner soul
Desirous to reach my passionate goal
So many still shower praises
Why then I shan't continue
Simply to compose sweeter phrases

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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13 years 5 months ago

I am converting all old blogs unread poems
into stream
as blog poems have been banned
because of my bestial--eeeeeeeety
of posting more than one a day..
never mind that
glad you are reading mine
even on a holiday in
Melbourne or is it Sydney