I’ve been shooting at stars
in lazy floods
all day in this Rapture
hoping I strike a piece
of you so it will fall in toy diamond,
citrate frost, something I can chew on.
Your braided dream lilies looped
together with dowsing rods crafted
by an alchemist in a deleted scene
from a shelved noir.
For this space ordained
you, this panel graffiti in obsidian marker,
the confessional alarm
in your belly button,
and your bitten lilypad
psychofage waits for your heart’s Host
to fall with flipper women hissing
beneath spinning Roman columns,
hungry as light bulbs dimming,
their receivers
ringing one
after another
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A self ordained surrealist poet
could be expected to be a pretentious dick. You never are. And need I say it? I never flatter.
Fucking love your work man and this one is particularly good. Tell me if I'm missing something but I can't flaw it. No critique. Superb work. Oh, only one crit, the double spacing is unnecessary, to avoid it use Shitft-enter instead Enter.
May I post my reading to Neopoet.com on Facebook?
https://soundcloud.com/neopoet/the-columns-by-john-fink555-allen
You even made me look up a word 'psychofage '.
Thanks, mate.
Sure
Thank you Jess.