Cold

I remember the way that you touched me
the way that you hand felt in mine,
your lips were so soft
.
In my mind’s eye I capture
the way that you looked at me,.
as if you loved me too much.

Vowed our love was eternal
with every word you uttered,
and deed completed.

But now you’re cold
icy, as frigid air,
the chill winds blow.

I live and breathe despair
but you won’t return.
I am unloved

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda

Comments

Hiya Lou

A sad ending - but one that many will relate to.

Thank you for sharing

Love Mand xxxxxxxx

Hallo Mand

this was inspired by a very old relationship.

lou

Lou, though I love poetry

Lou, though I love poetry born from a lover's rejection and know intimately its pain, I will this time speak as I would to my daughter....

Know that life has a series of lovers for you. And the one that left only left you because there are many lovers yet to be known. He made room for them to enter your life. And each lover brings you the same gift with their leaving.

Anna

thanks

lou

Jayne

The feeling is real, but the realationship was long ago.

thank you

love always lou