You've been so hard,
I've been so mean,
I wanted you
_No matter what!
Ruthlessly
I got you ground
To brew
My mourning mug
Jan 23, 2019
Coffee Beans
About This Poem
Last Few Words: The (mourning) is intended the way it's written
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
I love this
I wish it was so much longer!
The poem is well punctuated but doesn't end with a period....so I hope this means you plan to keep going!!
Hello Eumoplus
Thank you for taking the time to read this little piece inspired by a pro shot. I'm pleased to know that you like it.
Not sure that I have anything to add, but totally agree with you that a period is missed there.
Highly appreciate it.