lovedly

Dec 13, 2022

CIRCLE HULLA BALLOO MY VIEW

I dare to disagree
yes life goes in circles
each circle starts with a beginning
then it comes back to the same point

Being a scientist
I must add on
circles are round
the sun being static
other planets going around
anti cycle
meaning
NOT CLOCKWISE

All wonder how and why
Well a simple answer
folks don't understand
all existence is magnetic
without it we would never ever exist
be it human animal or planet

then there would have been
NO CIRCLES
Hope you hear me
motions come and go in
cyclic order only

Believe you me
LIFE IS ONLY CIRCULAR

The Neos also go around each
circling ....

About This Poem

Last Few Words: INSPIRED BY RAY

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

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Comments

Wow

I can agree that a life cycle is a series of stages a living thing goes through during it's life. All plants and animals go through life cycles. Woven with artistic beauty!
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huh,

interesting take! i like the imagery, the use of captilization is also pretty nice :)

also i think the title is

also i think the title is funny which is always a bonus

Circle Hulla Balloo

Hello, Lovedly,
The fascinating circle of life - pretty amazing. All things are truly related and interlaced within one another. Very nice!
Lav

Rosewood Apothecary

Especially for Lovedly

Ouroboros

I am the birth of all tomorrows
The serpentine ouroboros
Wyvern eating it’s own tail
This transmigration of the soul

All things die must be reborn
In palingenesis of morn
Metempsychosis beyond death
Now reincarnate with this breath

Endless cycles, ancient snake
Devours itself for it’s own sake
Rain to rivers flow to seas
Rise to clouds which rain on me

very good

you speak of REINCARNATION of life
but in another form ----no link to last one
at all

Hulllalllalllaa ballooo my view ...lol

Ahh..

But the sun is not static. A line can only return to a point relative to another point, as it is truly in a different place relative to the universe, physically and in time. We all are time travellers! Isn't it wonderful?!

Thomas

We all are time travellers! Isn't it wonderful?!

yeah all humans we you and she are

Weee...yoooooo!

and Yeeeee Haaaaa!
Whoooo Weeeee
and
Ra Ra Ra!!!

Thomas

and add on

hahaha....................................

dear lovedly,

"NOT CLOCKWISE " is also known as (counter clockwise) or my favorite (Widdershins) a Wiccan and Pagan thing.

*love, Cat.

p.s.
I believe in circles, too.

yeah Cats

now my brain also moves
in circles often clockwise
but should be anti

At that moment of
hulla ballooo
my minds springs
flew
now I must thank you....