Christmas Day

I miss you everyday
but today I miss you more

I make memories without you
theres a hole in the fabric of my mind

this holiday you loved so much
I celebrate in your name, secretly

I miss you more each year
and until we meet again

smiling tears will ever fall

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I hope everyone has a Safe and Merry Christmas ... in Memory of my Mother

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda

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Comments

Hi Jayne

It seems as years pass like starling that we gain ever more friends and family with whom we can celebrate the seasons only in memory.
May you and yours have a wonderful Christmas........................stan

Jayne

They will be there gathering around you and you know that.
Don't forget they feel your tears, as they do your happines.
So stay happy and know that they are with you always.
Also know that there are many that think of you throughout the year and in thinking of you stand at your side,
Yours as always Ian.T

Hello Seren

Liked this cute piece. Sad though
I really liked that last line especially "smilling tears" so original for me at least :)
best wishes