War, what a shameful thing to see
That brings termination to mankind
Causing everything to become a nightmare
With all these horrible crime scenes
Like a living place in hell with a disaster
To see such madness turning into a ghost town
with all human deadly flesh body
dripping blood turning into a river flow
skeleton bones stay on the side
that filled with horrifying cries
Is this how we want to see our future build
With people suffering from fear and death
their lives become shattered and helpless
Mother planet is being destroyed in no time as the key
Just because someone wants to show off his egoism
to see who is the most powerful to conquer the world
Let’s be true to ourselves that
War is only a destructive weapon
to our humankind with no care
that is bringing harm to us
So, let’s stop and wake up
and smell the coffee
To face the reality
To help save the world
By Voting “NO” to war
Spreading the seed of love and kindness
To teach and educate our youth
with a mindset of respect and dignity
sharing trust and peace for all
Mar 11, 2023
Challenge- In the Land of Chaos
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Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
hello
Yes this is rapidly becoming a land of chaos. And chaos too often leads to all out war. Now a few ideas you might think over concerning your poem. I notice there are no stanzas or even line breaks. This results in an intimidating "word wall" which can run off readers. Another reason to put stanza or line breaks is to add emphasis to certain lines or stanzas which you think are more important. Give it a try and see if you think this can work in this poem