Roll over my love
Look deeply into my eyes
Kiss me one last time
May 24, 2023
Challenge- Dear John Letter
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
How novel...
an idea for a modern, English senryu! Nothing more to be said. Good stuff! ~ Geezer.
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Dear John
The simplest, most touching Dear John letter I have seen. Great job!
Thank you, I appreciate your
Thank you, I appreciate your reading my poems and you comments. Any help is great.