lovedly
lovedly
Apr 10, 2022

BRILLIANCE OF HUMAN ......neopoets edit .......

Can be discernible
from the quality of content
and the poetic intent
in the slightest use of cement
when the likes of you need
to vociferous comment

do not rant
this to you all I grant
my mind often runs at a slant
like an egg plant

but discern it you can't
as you have a mind
without a planned plant
so simply with me chant

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Geezer

mean that there are those that just go along with the crowd? Not understanding, but feeling like they have to say something, say what the rest are saying? I know a lot of people like that. That is just human nature, not wanting to feel left out, many times, people don't bother to take the time to question what they hear or want to spend the time learning about things. That's okay, we soon learn who those people are and what their motives are. As long as they are not being malicious, it doesn't bother me. You are an enigma; most don't understand what you say or take the time to decipher your ramblings. [Which I don't believe are ramblings at all]. ~ Geez.
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lovedly

It just came to my mind reading poems one too many why rant and now as you say ramble You have a polite way to tick me off in your inimitable way.... Say what you want to really say....my mind is saturated today.
What about vociferous you say?

Jackweb

As Cat pointed out, 'vociferously' here should be vociferous hence it is referring to a person which makes the adjective fitted in the line. Vociferously is the adverb!

Thanks!