BREAKING INTO FANDANGO
Twists and turns
ragged edges
and right angles
circles broken
crashing
into perpendicular
chaotic serendipity
chance or destiny
then suddenly
life’s madness
breaking into bleeding
or fandango….
Aug 20, 2012
BREAKING INTO FANDANGO--edit
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Joe
A dance of the mind I guess that falls off a little in the closing stages,
as all things even the music stops..
You take care young Joe and know we are thinking of you, Yours Ian.T
Fandango :)
Fandango :)
superb
An extraordinary contraindication.
I suspect a typo on the line
'thn suddenly'
did you mean
''then suddenly'?
Yes, thanks, It should read
Yes, thanks, It should read "then"