Up with the lark at the crack of dawn
A familiar mundane routine
It’s only ten years since this boy was born
But he tells everyone he’s fifteen
His coat seemed inviting, on that cold winter’s day
He accepted the invite at once
The comfort incited him, to go all the way
So he feigned a hurt leg, and grabbed hold of a cane
This way when he’s out, and about with his flock
He could then take his time, alone with his laughter
After all, if the sheep, don’t have enough food
There’d be less of them there to look after
Over the bleats that repeat like an echo
His loneliness spawned an endeavour
From being alone, comes boredom and trouble
He hatched a plan that wasn’t’ clever
Upon reaching the village, the boy cried ‘wolf!’
And panic, quickly ensued
He was playing with fire, he’d lit the fuse
There was no wolf, and no going back
The trees grew leaves and the people grew wise
To the Shepard boy’s wolf-themed lies
Until one day it happened, it crawled through the bracken
And gave chase with its eyes on the prize
With his panic-stricken head, and his mind all jumbled
He attempted to flee, but tumbled
He cried wolf again, but his lies had been rumbled
Was ignored, the wolf won, his life crumbled
No sheep were harmed, on that cold winter’s day
But the boy who had lied, didn’t make it
He was stalked by a wolf, with razor sharp teeth
And the wolf was too shrewd to fake it
He went in for the kill, the boy went out with a bang
But his death, was not in vain
For thousands of years, saving thousands of tears
People have been taught to refrain
From spreading lies cos, they jeopardise, one’s credibility
If you lie, you must accept, the liability
The best policy is honesty, as the Shepard has shown
He laid in the field, with scars unhealed, unable, to go home
Comments
This is powerful
There is so much truth and power in this piece. Liars will always be exposed and in the end, karma will pay them back for all they have hurt. Unfortunately, it is there victims left to put the pieces back together....
Well it have been great to
Well it have been great to have come up with this fable instead of just the poem! Might work my way through fables. Find it fun. Or create a unique one. I'd like to hear one of yours after doing the same?
A good challenge
I will have to see what I can do...fables or fairy tales?
Fables. You pick which one.
Fables. You pick which one. There a list of Aesop's if just google. but if u did English lit, then u probs know loads anyway. Any of them would be fun.
but we should both do same
but we should both do same one, be more fun. or not. win-win. decide
I think would be fun
To do either...we can do different or choose to do the same.
Okay, so lets do two: one
Okay, so lets do two: one the same, one of our own choice. U pick the one we both do and then leave it to each other to pick our own.
Created one about a swan who
Created one about a swan who forgot how to swim, recently. Moral is don't let disabilities put you down. Cos fables have a lesson in them, i think they are great. Great for kids to learn from. Making the best of bad situations.
Or lets take it slow, one at
Or lets take it slow, one at a time. How about the hare and the tortoise?
I like the tortoise and the hare
We can do one at a time. Now are we each doing our own take on this or are we collaborating?
oooh interesting thought. I
oooh interesting thought. I've never collaborated before. how would we go about this. Ur the english student!
I'm thinking, maybe both give
I'm thinking, maybe both give ideas and write half each. is that how it works? half ideas and half writing???
Are you
We can do that. You can write the first two stanzas..then I will write two and then we can do the conclusion if that works. Are you a premium member? We can list as collaboration if you are.
If not possible we can maybe
If not possible we can maybe just do for fun if can't submit? how does one become a premium member?
or graduate, but point is u
or graduate, but point is u know bout this stuff
I am not an English major or student
But I do know how to write. It may be fun to collaborate.
I'm not a premium member.
I'm not a premium member. Sorry, someone else said they were an english grad, got confused. Erm yeah okay re the plan. Think we need to make a plan how to go about it. I'm thinking, relating the tortoises wrinkles, as lines on his skin, to the start and finishing lines. and he goes under the hurdles (not that there are any, but it's a poem!) and the hare jumps over them and trips up. and keeps tripping up but still ahead then gets cocky and rests thinking im still ahead despite falling repeatedly?
Interesting idea
Maybe we can start doing just one of our choice and think about the other for a bit?
Sure, I'll pick another. so
Sure, I'll pick another. so many to choose from. how long does it take u to write one on average
And where you from?
And where you from?
Will get premium member ship
Will get premium member ship soon i hope, think just have to win more. new to this, only won one so far. In the meantime still fun to write regardless of winning things. Love writing more than anything. Do you know of any other sites to enter compos tho? more people's stuff to read. can have too much of a good thing but depends what the good thing is. If learning, then you can't
It can
Take me a few hours to write one once I get started.
You gonna do hare and the
You gonna do hare and the tortoise? or another? so many to choose from! u like that one but are sooo many. maybe i can pick for u and u pick for me. make it more of a challenge and more interesting?
I was going to pick another
You can pick for me if you want....
No sorry, lets pick our own.
No sorry, lets pick our own. Which are you going for?