Nordic cloud
Nordic cloud
Jan 22, 2011

BOLD DEATH

"BOLD DEATH"
Margaret Ann Waddicor 22nd January 2011.
Joe and Dennis Go made me think about death too.

Bold death,
you stride through consciousness,
to take our spirits with you,
to a place where peacefulness
and silence reigns supreme;

we dream of you as desperate
and sad,
as heavy handed, brash,
as silky as a ghost at dawn,
when moisture leaves the land
and grasses stand up tall
all decked with dazzling dew;

there are you lurking
in the shadowed wood,
the horses charging time,
like clockwork figures,
never still;

the cogs of passing years
and all our fears are true,
we shall be there to die,
one day,
but not today;

we think it due,
when time has made its span,
a span that's long and grand,
and when this life is shortened
by a blow
of fate,

its cause too late to turn,
they churn our thoughts
and scream their messages of pain
and anguish
dire,

as we prepare the fire
to make the pyre
that takes our souls on high,
and down below.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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Comments

K

Sigh.

"But not today"... poignant words uttered by the gladiator Juba in the film *Gladiator*

I've often seen life in the ring, we are warriors, gladiators. The crowd cheers!

~A

Nordic cloud

...as I said Joe and ...Go; their comments and others I just wrote today on reading them.

Its like the bit my mother wanted read out at her funeral it was by Dylan Thomas
and now I can't find it...it ended "but just for now." I loved that ending leaving one
expectant for the dead person rising once again from their sleep.

And that's what I wished for my mother too, and she is with me now.
Love to you and thank you my Shirley.

Esker

Esker

14 years 3 months ago

your way of painting in with flourish
and dabbing soft the colour
its rich texture and subject matter
is well handled

Thank You

Nordic cloud

'Tis you Steven with the eye to wake up,
sensitive to the colours and shapes that I paint,
that allows you to see such in what I write,
and I thank you for joining me in the dance of poetry
that defies space and time,

and enters into the realms of magic,
however banal or common place,
realistic or mundane the beginnings,
you and I can see beyond them
into that magical world, and revel in it
as if we were on some potent 'trip.'
Don't you think?

Love from your friend Ann.