Indivisible_Origin
Indivisible_Origin
Feb 15, 2023

Blue Tomorrow

I like long hair girls
and the short ones too
I like living with lust
limp it along
with blood if I must
I like kicking myself
and making it count
when i'm down
I like borrowing worry
from the man I'll be
and the sky we see
might not be
blue tomorrow
I like keeping my mind
in the corner
with my way
leaving them lost
wherever I stay
I like humming along
to dead lovers
favorite songs
I like moderation most
when it's a myth
I'll take a sip
just nip
give in to gulps
til I seem fit
to bite the building in half

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

About the Author

Region, Country: Louisiana US, USA

Favorite Poets: Ocean Vuong

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Comments

Geezer

the tension rising until the last line! That's how I feel, I want to bite buildings in half! I want the things I say, to be part of the biggest mouthful ever. Nice stuff. ~ Geezer.
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