lovedly
lovedly
Jun 11, 2020

Blue Prints

Such a lovely plan
for next life
in well
can't believe it
heaven

do send me a blue print
if you can

I have studied so many lives
O poet man

I dare not be different with thee

all wives are at night time
only
lovely

Rest you have told everyone

all wives are similar
exception is
none

not one

What a bloody foolish
husband
with him life is no fun
lol

trying to find another one
anyone would be welcome

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Geezer

Geezer

4 years 10 months ago

see where you are coming from this time lovedly. well can't believe it heaven? Can't believe you/they/he/she is going to heaven? A little elucidation please? ~ Geezer.
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Gracy

Gracy

4 years 10 months ago

Anyone would not do for me, lovedly! I'm not sure what you mean, despite your explanation. Dumber and dumber...that's me.
Gracy

Geezer

Geezer

4 years 10 months ago

You are trying to say that; He would like to be a wife so he could show her how much he appreciates her? ~ Geezer.
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Lavender

Hi, Lovedly,
I feel the frustration of it all here, so much so that 'anyone would be welcome.' Interesting title, and it seems the poem is speaking to a poet, correct? The language sounds Old-English or Early Modern to me, which makes the 'lol' reference stand out a bit - but maybe that was intentional? Very intriguing!
Thank you!
L