BLOSSOMS' BANE

Sunshine through new leaves
Far crow fussing at bored hawk
cut short by my sneeze

Last Few Words: It had been too long since I wrote a Haiku

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost

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I heard that sneeze and saw fluttering wings.

This one is a little bit of fun on the surface. But its a sneaky bugger. Implants images.

I love it.

Love always Sis.

"Sneaky" good huh". Well I should sneeze more lol........stan

I've never read a poem that you've written ?that doesnt provide imagry. Sneaky *real good* lol

Hugs x

To sneeze or not to sneeze, that is the question

that was good! Trouble is, that one just ain't enough, like Lay's potato- chips. ~ Gee.
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Seems the less I write in a poem the better people like it.......hmmmm........

my implication, that you should write less in your poems, only that you should write more Haiku. Maybe a string of them in one set?
~ Gee.
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poking fun at myself. Been a Long time since I did a haiku series.....maybe time to think up another one........