BITTER SWEET

The sweet ones
who comment sweetly
are hardly any
as the world proceeds on
such beautiful ones are also gone

The hardness prevails
as all know
one day those
unwanted ones
will also go
yeah
they damn well know

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

We have to believe that that someday will come. ~ Geez.
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but of course as I always say
life is controlled by
GENES
ENVIRONMENT
AND
CIRCUMSTANCE
ALL IS A MATTER OF TIME
Thanks friend you r kind

I wish the bad ones would get bored and leave a little bit sooner. I perceive that you feel strongly about this! I do too ;)

*hugs, Cat

yes
as Simon says in auditions
we need a third yes
hello Gee
yes yes yes