Jenifer James
Aug 30, 2023

The bins of Old London

The bins of Old London are fattened and gorged
Gulping down gadgets and cracked plastic toys,
Gagging on curry, tofu and toast,
Somebody’s rubbish and somebody’s joy,
Grandpa’s teeth and mothers’ pink socks,
All bunged in the bins of old London.

But foxes feed here, and squirrels swing by,
So do the homeless and thrifty.
What is worthless to you
Is worth more than jewels
To the hungry and poor of Old London.

The bins of Old London vomit it up,
Spewing up papers, bottles and chips,
Over the pavements and broken rose gardens,
While the tribes of this city walk carelessly by,
Stuffing, discarding and chucking away
The things which you needed,

But forgot anyway.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: In London at the moment... beautiful but mess!

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: nsw, australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Too many influences

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Comments

Ruby Lord

Your poem was very good. I enjoyed the imagery and the message it contains. The diversity of objects thrown away highlights the consumerism and waste within the confines of a voracious bin. I liked the way you personified the bins, that was excellent. The use of foxes and homelessness ties it together in the social context of life in a busy city. Well done, great poem. I hope you're enjoying your time in London. Ruby :)

Alex Tanner

I recall visiting my daughter when she lived in London (Woolwich Area) and looking out of the window one morning to see a pair of foxes frolicking, (being polite here ) in the road. I think you have this one spot on. Alex

J

Love
'Foxes frolicking in Woolwich'

Off we go... another poem, except I might go:

'Foxes frolicking in Wapping Lane' or

The foxes of Shadwell Bridge...'