O son of man, born of a woman,
Your end nears, beside you it sits,
In your friendliest of shadows it lurks;
It rises and sets at your bedside.
Why then say cry me a river?
Why then feed the poor a pail of pain, and upon their ways lay traps of tragedies?
Why send the orphan away by dark?
Why hide the widows in the cover of despair?
O son of man, born of a woman,
The end you dare not seek, seeks you,
Seeks you, from conception
To the hour you're lowered to its hold.
O son of man, born of a woman,
On a path narrow over roily waters,
A lone sailor on a voyage
Whose name the way to the end.
O your prisoner, you, free!
The chains upon your mind unclasp.
This new wine pour upon your soul,
And free your spirit.
Comments
Hi Teddy
Thank you very much for the flowery comments.
Chima
well now that was one powerful poem , I love the way you repeated you first line through out. the only thing I might suggest is a change of title to this wonderful piece of work your current title is confusing and I must say I passed this beautiful poem many times because of it's title. I do admire your work you put a lot of thought into your words and it shows
Thanks Lynn
I do appreciate your kind words and advice well taken. Thank you very much.
I will echo...
Chrys' summation of your work and say that you have improved steadily as a poet with each and every post. ~ Geez.
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Geezer
Thanks for finding the poem interesting.
Dear Chima,
Fantastic and powerful poem! I love your poetry and the way you can paint a picture with just a few words. Amazing job. :)