Because of the noisy river
I can't hear my own thoughts
It is a nice interruption
Nature yelling
BE
HERE
NOW
Caught up in
The abundant flow
Of everything
Beside myself
Because of the noisy river
I can't hear my own thoughts
It is a nice interruption
Nature yelling
BE
HERE
NOW
Caught up in
The abundant flow
Of everything
Beside myself
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