gregwa8
gregwa8
Jun 07, 2018

Beside Myself

Because of the noisy river
I can't hear my own thoughts

It is a nice interruption
Nature yelling

BE
HERE
NOW

Caught up in
The abundant flow

Of everything
Beside myself

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: Maryland, USA

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