spydurpoet
Jun 27, 2011

Become Yesterday

It feels like yesterday already,
eternal winter ambience surrounds existence
with barren trees and heavy limbs.

Memories like bonfire embers dance
tauntingly about my ghost...
beautiful sparks: offspring of hypnotic flame
threatening to set me ablaze
even as I reach out to hold on to their warmth.

But that's the past personified;
tantalizing, promises of heat and comfort
where only burning ash remain
flickering, lilting in the air
before disappearing into cold and sordid night.

I remain alone
haunted by sparkling cinders,
memories of what will become yesterday.

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: USA

Favorite Poets: David Jon Martin - Author of The Chicken on My Head (a collection of poetry) and Eeedgar The Elephant Who Exaggerated (a children's poem/picture book)

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raj

13 years 10 months ago

if one is to ignore the errors mentioned in Ian's comment...i find this write to be quite sombre which is in tune with the subject/essence of this write...i liked it..