Clentin
Mar 26, 2023

Baby Girl

This newborn child
Makes our family so very proud

When I stare at her smiling face
My mind begins to race

My heart is filled with joy
Soft words I began to employ

Her lips pour out tiny sounds
That have no real bounds

Her eyes shine brightly
My words aren't taken lightly

About This Poem

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: USA Pennsylvania, USA

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neopoet

The below is a computer generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

Congratulations on the arrival of your baby girl! She is sure to bring joy and love to your family. May she grow up healthy, happy, and surrounded by love. Cherish every moment with her and watch as she blossoms into a beautiful young woman. Best wishes to you and your family as you embark on this new journey together!

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Geezer

on the new addition to the family, a happy little ditty for a celebration! ~ Geezer.
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RoseBlack

A poem filled with pride and awe over this brand new bundle of joy! Congratulations!