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Oct 08, 2018

Autumn series poetry The first

The Autumnal fever

Wow,Autumn once again is here
what a lovely season
for all poets so dear

what a beautiful autumn
you relay
here it’s raining,
then a bit cloudy
sunnier later
during the day

the clouds show anger
but quietly pass away
wonderful trees
leaves,
so colorfully display
my! what hues
I wish I could show you

wait

I’ll fetch my camera
for you

About This Poem

Last Few Words: By the time the first poet reads it twill be three days I by then each poem by then separate 3 days

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

R

Loved it. You are a poet after my own heart. You left everything up to me as to how I read it. I read and re read and each time I found what I expected, a great read.
Now there's a clever girl.

S

line 4, I'd change autumn to season to avoid 2 lines ending in same word. You also misspelled autumn farther along but I'll let You find it lol.Also, I know between autumn and fall it's more poetic to say autumn but I think this poem could use a few more falls and a few less autumns. But i enjoyed it and you might notice I didn't complain about its length like a certain person I know who claims epic whenever I write one 7 stanzas lol.....Dang I'm gonna be glad when autumn arrive here. It was 82 degrees today.........stan