brittle light
brittle light
Nov 19, 2014

Aural Lotion

sweet nothings
after-glowing
glide
tenderly
mingling
love's sheen
like liquid starlight
dripping
fragrant
kisses
lingering
mid-air
fading
slowly
reluctantly
into sleepy
invisible
silence

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: upstate New York USA, USA

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Comments

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Love it. Simple. Flows very well. Language is strong.

Thanks,