docmaverick
docmaverick
Apr 19, 2013
This poem is part of the workshop:

Mindful Memorable Freeform: The Challenge

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An Attimood Towards An Intermood Whilste, Feeling Ludey

There is a sadness personified
rubbing at my core,
that robs me of my harmony

and voids me of true peace
because of the way that others, are.

Therefore, I am grateful for THIS interlude
that awes me with it’s friendship,
and brings into my life, Light.

So, I readily welcome
it’s universal embodiment,

that keeps no task-log,
and knows no earthly bounds.
It has been often said

that a cold-hearted orb rules the shadows of the night,
and that daylight possesses the Universe’s grace;

two schools of thought come into mind.
If Night rules Fate, then shadows are royalty
leaving Daylight the one to deceive

and when the truth is discerned,
it won’t be as cut and dried as Good versus Evil.

For we’ll all be but a victim of collateral damage
pressing ever onward,
towards the vista of our ill-content,

where we’re known to dawdle
in the laps of our concerns.

Looking forward
I can only hope reality will yield
what’s just inside the aspects of our dreams,

and that allegiance to those shared dream realms
will prove to be, universal.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I know....I know...less focus, more abstractivity....something; along those "lines".......or, whither thou goest; much to our dismay. too many; doc.

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates

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