Aghast by the past
Bombast and blast simulcast
Last forecast downcast
Apr 16, 2018
Assault Lines:
About This Poem
Last Few Words: If past is not past, then present marred with no future.
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
mark
Thanks for your comment. the madness seems to be increasing all over the planet with the Rohinjyas in Myanmar and missile strikes in Pakistan, bombings in Afghanistan on a macro level and barbaric violence against innocent girls in several places in India. People need to channel their rage, their angst, their fears, their hopes through the sublime arts like Poetry and Neopoet is a premier place for poets.
Picasso
- his comments are very well balanced and centred unlike his paintings that can be appreciated by those possessing artistic sensibilities - I am not among those fortunate ones.
Just another day...
of watching the news, with a feeling of doom in my heart. ~Geezer.
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Doom and gloom
but hope for a glimmer of bloom and boom