unmovable mule
push tug this donkey won't budge
kindly check its load
Sep 10, 2011
Ass
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Thank you both Rosi, and Loni
Not all who are stubborn are stubborn for no reason.
In ink,
Dabbler
hello
At Last! a poem about me lol..........stan
David
A good Senyru as aposed to the Haiku, you should join Barbara's Workshop as we are doing an Eternal Renga which is a Haiku/Senyru of 5-7-5 then the next lines are two lines of 7 syllables each, the normal length for these is around 35 Stanzas but we is lazy, Take care great to have you on board,
Yours Ian.T