themoonman
themoonman
Dec 20, 2010

Artists

Everyday losers possessing ability
to pretty up the bullshit;
or send it flaming
in vibrant cohesion's
restoring the reasons
for bypassing the banality
of everything, other than
the naked meaningful moment
and place it for all who see.

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

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lou

lou

14 years 4 months ago

ouch

lou

mona

mona

14 years 4 months ago

Burning as hell "ouch.
I would love to know what is your inspiration

love it too much
"enjoyable,simple, and well written".

themoonman

Life my dear, Life. I am a big fan of the arts, and if history tells us
anything about artists, whether it be poets, painters, musicians ...
most struggle during their entire lives, and are never known, some
are ... but usually after they are dead. This dedication is given to
the artists that have captured the beauty of Life's moments, and
given of themselves and their beings, and to all that ever will.

thank you Mona for reading and asking your question

Richard

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ziggy

14 years 4 months ago

hello your responce to mona, i like wat your saying there
the first couple of lines says it all in this one lol
havea great xmas , wishes from ireland to you ,,,,,,,,zigs

Candlewitch

I'm with Ziggy on this one, but my wishes come from southern Wisconsin.

love, Cat

Hooded Stranger

Hooded Stranger

14 years 4 months ago

Richard,

this has to be one of your best.

Perfectly short but with enough content to be fulfilling.

I love the message you are conveying here.

You have wishes from Ireland and South Wisconsin, so not to leave you out, happy new year wishes from Stonehenge UK.

regards,

HS