lovedly
lovedly
Nov 23, 2014

apples lof love

Sitting under an apple tree,
she and me
wondering
which apple to taste first

one up on the tree
or the one,
one yet can't see
hidden in the bushes
of my friend ye...

Then she smiled
how’s apple feeling?
under her blushes
my mouth started watering
and
what an appeal
she did my heart steal
and
under the bushes
we did play
and
let tree apples
where they were stay

what delicious apple said she
Remember
Adam and Eve

FOR EVER WILL
all my friends ye
they ate the apples off that tree???

Don't pull me!!!

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

lovedly

i am now going to do some pull ups
staring from me
so many poets in pages
4 to 12
have only one comment
including yours truly
so now eat apples
with me
will ye