Dandini
Dandini
Jan 12, 2021

Another miracle might happen

Who says miracles never happen? Who?
Who says they are just for the privileged few?
Believe me when I tell you I met an angel
And it was just like a real fairy tale.

With her wings of love and friendship,
Maybe she came down from the blue sky up above,
Bringing the best of both heaven and earth;
And the light of innocence shone with love.

I am thankful she came into my life that day,
But I failed to recognise the need for trust;
And her warm smile made me come alive
But I threw it away and my life fell into dust.

So maybe one day life will be worth living again
And maybe another miracle will be given to me.
The next time I shall not be the idiot that I was,
Always striving for more than anyone can hope for..

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: England

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets include Siegfried Sassoon and (obviously) Shakespeare. I quite like Charles Bukowski too even though he was a bit plebeian.

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Comments

Geezer

busily humming along with your irregular rhyme scheme and wham! I was hit with the ending of your poem. It makes sense, I like the thought, but it just doesn't rhyme! How about seeing what you can do to fix it? ~ Geez.
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Ray Whitaker

Just my opinion.

I like the piece a lot. well written,

I agree with Geezer above...

However don't like the word idiot in there. You are writing about an intelligent person in the piece.

Dandini

Dear Geezer & Ray
Thank you for your comments.

PS I don't do rhyme!
Not usually anyway.

Lavender

Hi, Dandini,
I've read this over a few times - there is some regret here, but much more sincere and gracious affection.
Thank you,
L

S

It was a miracle which saved my life years ago when I was in a very dark place. Perhaps you Will receive yet another one