Who lifts
not men
but hopes
who travels
not alone
but helps all to cope
who composes
not knowing woman
nor woe
nor recognition?
am I the only one
about on the Internet
read by so many
why? Ask them
Am I the only one
Jun 09, 2016
Am I, the only one
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Really, dear Loved, the only one?
Nothing in this qualifies you as the only one. I am sorry if you are feeling lonely.
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Hiya Lovedly
Hiya Lovedly
I like the poem, but can't help wondering if Am I would be better than I am.
It makes it less of a statement and more of a rhetorical question
Just wondering. Jxx
yes
you are right shall amend it
??
Really loved - this whole poem is waffle *big smile*
you can do better than this egocentric dribble *bigger smile*
How about a title change to fit this condensed version that is minus the me me.....
Who lifts
not men
but hopes
who travels
not alone
but helps all to cope
who composes
not knowing woman
nor woe
nor recognition?
Up to you of course .... all in my opinion only
love judy
xxc
It is comments like this, Judy
that make me wish Neopoet had a 'like' feature, like Facebook. You said everything that needs to be said about this poem.
Thanks Jess
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I endorse both above
I salute Judy Madam
she helps me a lot
shall amend
Jess and Judy
waffle OUT just see
May all you too bless
you of course are
our Guiding light
why for the silly distinction fight
right!
Loved
I guess you realise that the above are right, and I think you are much better and long enough in the tooth to know better.
We will wait to read your next piece as all read yours hoping that you will bring once again a great piece of writing to the stream,
Yours as always Ian..
my god Ian
you launch me in a
GAS balloon
hope I don't burst
a bit too soon
here It's noon