Only great people
are humble like you
and I,
That's why along the sea beaches
we roll
and
the surfs pass by ...
But then some one looks back
and says
Wasn't he
He?
Yeah that's
All about life aint it.
Oct 06, 2011
All In Humility
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
It makes me grin. I dig it.
It makes me grin. I dig it. The last two lines make the poem and wrap it up quite nicely.
That you could find time to grin
sets my heart in a spin ,
some day we shall have more fun ,
when
A Nobel we win
we will become good friends
once we know each other as poets only
see u around
Today after years
a Swedish Nordic poet
was awarded
the NOBEL
Someday when in the bushels of time ,
we surface more simpler than naive
perhaps our faces shall reveal ,
the purpose of mankind
....hopefully......................
wonderful poem loved! I have
wonderful poem loved! I have missed you.
At times I wonder whether I am being really missed as much as I
MISS U ALL Neopoets of the world...
sets my heart in a spin ,
some day we shall have more fun ,
when
A Nobel we win
we will become good friends
once we know each other as poets only
see u around
Today after years
a Swedish Nordic poet
was awarded
the NOBEL
Someday when in the bushels of time ,
we surface more simpler than naive
perhaps our faces shall reveal ,
the purpose of mankind
....hopefully......................
[grins] just today I said to someone
'have the humility to accept your greatness'
we are in synch,
and proud to be so with a fine piece of poetry like this.
MY Sincerest respects and regards
You have been the architect of my poetic mind
you do lure .....
That's now for sure.
to u i bow