All That is Golden

This is charming, it needs some work on it, but the skeleton leaf of it is cast, now lets see...

I don't know why but the scent of the air is fine, specially the last two words seem not in keeping with the slight mystery your poem gives us. It sort of sits down there for a rest.

frequency sings in tune? with the music made by the ....something....moon?

Secrets...there's an s here so MarvelS should follow suit?

I was just doing this and that as it has something special in spite of its simplicity.
Keep writing, L.Nordic cloud.

Brilliant... a little treasure this one, I wouldn't change anything about it, it run & flows so well & lands in the right places in every way in my opinion.

Love it!

Cloud (the other one!)

I have now read Anns comment, no oposition intended, I can see her comments are worthy... just I usually comment before I read any other comments so mine are strictly uncloloured by any other issue or perspective... Hello cloud-sister!.... I sttill love it just as it is, merely my opinion.
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