It is an outer world of mysteries
possible alien life
are the legends true?
do these mysteries have only logical explinations?
do these strange other life forms live among us?
why don't we know the answers?
is area 51 area a real place with actual others unknown to us?
these can and will be answered.
if you believe in them.
THEY ARE HERE....
Dec 29, 2011
ALIENS
About This Poem
Last Few Words: sorry i'm not continuing the runaway files but this poem popped into my head just today so enjoy!!!
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Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
hello
I would have sworn that I already commented on this poem. All one has to do is look around to be convinced that aliens are among us and most of them are in Congress lol. You might want to review the area 51 line........stan
sorry
sorry and hello. i accidentally saved the poem twice i was in a rush and had to get to my next class so i typed the last few lines without noticing any mistakes with only thirty seconds remaining until the bell rang so sorry for the mistakes. funny comment about the congress . i thank you for the critism.
sincerely a new writer,
Stargirl