Pickle me a Dolphin;
sprinkle liberally with rye,
whip us up a Butter cup on
Snake n Pygmy pie.
Griddle ten rare rats arse
soaked in sauce o' barbeque;
serve it all in the banquet hall
As Squirrel -bollocks -stew.
Obi.
Aug 10, 2021
*Ahem* Gourmand 2
About This Poem
Last Few Words: good luck with that one.
Review Request Direction:
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Oh, for the want of a
Oh, for the want of a conscientious lavatorial attendant,
That he may dutifully relieve us of this turd.
Said the man with the bumpy nose.
I am more
in love with your bombastic complaint than the poem, which I found as entertaining as much of your other bawdy pieces. Here's to the man with his ear in his beer. I can think of no critique, so cheers.
Thomas
An ear...
full of beer? Sounds like a bubbly time! Kind of like pouring peroxide in your ear to get rid of ear-wax.! ~ Geez.
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Your piece inspired me
to write a joke. (I hope it's not a repeat.) My compliments to your bawdiness
late one night, a husband suddenly got out of bed to close the window.
His wife asked what was the matter?
The husband replied "it smells like skunk" and the wife said
"Oh, it's not so bad"
The husband quietly thought to himself "yes, but no reason for the neighbours to smell it too."
Thomas
I've not...
heard that one before! LoL ~ Geez.
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