'From the perspective
of an elderly aging poet....''''
Age we must
Beautifully put across
We all are in our aging stage...
ere we leave this worldly stage
let others now rage
and
take over our lives
with a new page
and
they in newer vistas engage
Our lives we have lived
says this nearing old page
Do not in maliciousness engage
Life’s given to each one
as a chess game
and
A pack of cards which rarely can be dealt twice
pick and choose
between dough nuts and rice.
we all have paid our life's price
Now throw the dice
who goes when
Lord may not know
but age is a given...
reward
we all now know
Here I go
you may follow!!!
Comments
Very interesting structure.
I like the way that your poem is structured and rhymes.
This being said, I am unable to discern a pattern. Could you perhaps comment a little on what you are going for here?
Ma'am
you must know
I am hardly a poet
No two poems are same
All each one is different
composed over
14000 free verse all over
I wonder why people read me
even jess finds an odd gem
Thanks
you also perhaps could
lovedly
off the cuff free poet
what comes to my mind i engrave
Well
I believe your poem here is certainly lovely and well thought out. I was just wondering if I were missing out on some hidden mystery.
knd thanks
Rhia