Candlewitch
Candlewitch
Jul 14, 2022

About You...

About You...

something in the way

you take my hand

caress my cheek

gaze into my eyes

breathe my name

kiss my throat

fondle my nape...

we undulate

oscillate

modulate

tangled limbs

of a work in progress

Something about you causes

my mouth to dry

breath to catch

pulse to race

body to sing...

The chorus

of the music of our souls

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Northwestern Wisconsin USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe

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Comments

Geezer

The story told is a one of love and unity with another. Excellent pace and word usage. ~ Geez.
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Mr joghe

I love the title.
The poem is about two lovers that felt the warmth of their bodies when they were together.

Jackweb

and erotic love verse. Generally short and graceful in form and typically dealing with themes of love and affection.

Beautifully penned piece!
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Seren

Seren

2 years 1 month ago

This reminded me of two souls dancing around each other an attracted like magnets. I think it is an absolute cracking poem. I love the title it suits the poem. I think this would make for some amazing lyrics!!!

Yep I went back in time again

Brava!!!

Love you always Lilbit xxx

S

this write manages to be sexual without being carnal. Well done