An Abdication:

Masquerade undone
Illusive victory won
Moral power gone

Last Few Words: Uncommented

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

Country/Region: Asia India

Favorite Poets: Rabindranath Tagore

The 'Last few words' were un-needed, your eight words said it.

Jess / Weirdelf

I have acceded to your fine review and appreciate your appreciation of my middling musings.